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2010-01-18 - Issue 3: Same Old, Same Old

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Dark_Einstein Posted: 19 Jan 2010 5:19 pm      Post subject: Re: Tails' Blog Issue 3 :: Same Old, Same Old

[quote:59kdjzdc]Also, try to be more in character. "I pissed in that coffee hoping Knuckles would be the one drinking it" doesn't sound like ANYTHING the sweet and friendly Tails we know would do.[/quote:59kdjzdc]
Agreed. Also, any perception of Tails other than a faggot, simply does not work.

Dean-O Posted: 19 Jan 2010 1:49 pm      Post subject: Re: Tails' Blog Issue 3 :: Same Old, Same Old

I already took out a large portion with fancharacters.

Also, in MY perception of Tails, he is the self-proclaimed documenter/chronicler of TSCI.

Zach Posted: 19 Jan 2010 9:58 am      Post subject: Re: Tails' Blog Issue 3 :: Same Old, Same Old

I like it as a whole, but I agree with Miracle for the most part. Writing 'in character', whilst simple for a comic script where there are no long monologues, is difficult for a journal-type entity and this didn't read much like Tails. Just so you know.

Miracle Posted: 19 Jan 2010 1:01 am      Post subject: Re: Tails' Blog Issue 3 :: Same Old, Same Old

I like it..... but I think it focuses on the fan characters too much. Tails talked about all the fan characters, but only two original characters. Remember, its TAILS' Blog, so try to keep it mostly about tails. Things like, "AJ has been watching animes all day" has absolutely nothing to do with Tails.

Also, try to be more in character. "I pissed in that coffee hoping Knuckles would be the one drinking it" doesn't sound like ANYTHING the sweet and friendly Tails we know would do. Safe that type of energy for the fan characters (trust me, you'll NEED it).

Dean-O Posted: 18 Jan 2010 4:47 am      Post subject: Tails' Blog Issue 3 :: Same Old, Same Old

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