Sped ZS ChroniclesPresented by sped2009-03-23 - Issue 2: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 | Jump to Issue: Author Says! Hey it's me Sped again, and here is the first page to SZSC and is the only all text page, so don't worry the next page is going to be normal. And this page will be explained later on if you don't know what's going on. I was going to wait till Friday and upload every Friday but in till I get a few pages out I'll be uploading as soon as they are done. I've already started on the next page and it is half way done, but I'm working on 3 or 4 different things at once...Any way I will get it done as soon as possible and it will be worth the wait. ( Don't worry Zach, it won't take long) But for the next day or so I'll be to busy to draw though, but just for a day or so. Also the first SZSC Prelog should be up some time next week on SA and it should provide the much needed background to the characters, the war, the story, and more. So if you would like to know more on SZSC then you may want to check it out when it's done :P . But in till then please at least wait for the first "real" page, it will explain this page. keep it clean... ~Sped |
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| DJ dude | Posted: 10 Apr 2009 7:41 pm Post subject: just wait... I don't know, I for one would like to wait and see what he does. And i don't mind waiting because I keep track of quite a few online comics and some only update once or twice a month. |
| Kjakings | Posted: 4 Apr 2009 3:32 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 I still hate the transparent hair in the cover. *cynical stare* |
| aj - comic guru | Posted: 1 Apr 2009 5:08 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Honestly not as bad as I was seeing in my head. It's not BAD, but there is some room for improvement. The thing that jumped at me the most is the legs, but maybe it will look better when fully colored. They just seem skinny... even for a Sonic character. There are other, more minor, issues with anatomy of the animal forms and some various other little tweaks could be done to make everything look better. I'd say: spend more time trying to perfect your drawings, work out all the kinks and details. It's not BAD, just not GREAT. Keep trying, I suppose. AJ Fox |
| sped | Posted: 1 Apr 2009 4:44 pm Post subject: W.I.P. http://www.sheezyart.com/art/view/2038522/ There is a W.I.P. there and it shows Sped from one of the panels that I'm working on, sorry for the delay. If you want to know why there was a delay then read my last few journals, later ~sped |
| aj - comic guru | Posted: 31 Mar 2009 4:23 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Wow, you guys, she's super cereal! ...and I totally know it's not DE. Cereal-ly. AJ Fox |
| Sally Acorn | Posted: 31 Mar 2009 12:11 pm Post subject: This is not DE I have Aids. |
| handle | Posted: 29 Mar 2009 8:22 pm Post subject: wow i had way to much caffeine if i posted that. |
| Kjakings | Posted: 28 Mar 2009 6:03 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 And here we have someone who agrees. Yaaaay! |
| Tamaki | Posted: 28 Mar 2009 3:57 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 I don't think I want words of encouragement for... this. This is just an eyesore. :| |
| aj - comic guru | Posted: 28 Mar 2009 3:38 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Welcome back Tamaki. Most of us have no words either... or, at least, no words of encouragement. AJ Fox |
| Tamaki | Posted: 28 Mar 2009 3:10 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 I can't comprehend this. I have no words. I go away for two months and this shit happens. Wow. Just wow. |
| handle | Posted: 27 Mar 2009 3:12 am Post subject: nice foreshadowing though it could have at least on panel to tell us not so bad but makes the issue boring |
| Kjakings | Posted: 26 Mar 2009 1:16 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 This better be one helluva good issue 2, or a fiver says there won't be any parts of you left for me to maul when I finally get back here. |
| sped | Posted: 25 Mar 2009 2:19 am Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 ...No I didn't and like I said i chose my words because of the plot, later on you will under stand why. The next page should explain why Sped is in like a sleep state, and how he got there... ~sped |
| Sonic Remix | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 10:11 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 "Don't forget who you are"? Did you borrow that from the Lion King or something? |
| Zach | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 7:13 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 I wrote our software so I can answer that. Each image you add is another issue. Numbering starts at 1. Therefore, your wall of text was issue 2. |
| sped | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 5:30 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 And it's only been uploaded for 2 hours, and it got 14 reply's and 37 views. But what got me is, how did it get uploaded as "issue 2" when it's still issue 1? Hmm...Interesting. |
| Zach | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 4:26 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Wow... all the usually silent visitors came out of the WOODWORK on this topic. Good to see y'all. It;'s nice to know people care. Keep up the commenting! |
| dude | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 3:03 pm Post subject: taylor hedgie... Did he not say "Hey it's me Sped again, and here is the first page to SZSC and is the only all text page, so don't worry the next page is going to be normal" noticed he said that this is going to be the ONLY all text page? So I guess that the next page wont be like that and we will just have to wait and see. Now if the next page is going to be all typing then that would be ignoring. |
| Arcterus | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 2:58 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 [quote="sped"]Yes AJ, you are completely right. But I had no choice in the matter because this is somewhat like a dream or something. It starts of dark and it get's lighter as he wakes up, and since Sped's primarily color is blue I had to go with that too, but this page is...One of a kind and I don't see this happening again at least for a very, very long time. Thanks for pointing that out.[/quote] One potential solution is to use an overshadow of some sort. |
| Taylor Hedgie | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 1:18 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 This is a comic site, not a fucking post-text-in-boxes-and hope it passes-as-a-comic site. |
| sped | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 12:57 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Once again, thank you AJ! And yes It is full of OC's of a wide variety and forms a big cast once all the character's are all introduced. And the next page will tell why he was asleep. And later on you will understand why i used "key", "war" and this thing telling him to remember what his name stands for and so on... thanks for all your comments ~sped |
| Kjakings | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 10:11 am Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Meh, fair points. I can gloat a bit if the next issue is all-text too though, right? |
| aj - comic guru | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 9:05 am Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 To Kjakings: I'd at least like you to point out what might be good about the comic as well. He won't improve if everything is negative, but that should be a hint for him to go in another direction. I am also weary about the story, but as far as I know he's using all OC's, so this might not really be a big problem depending on how he does his story. Hopefully we will enjoy the comics to come and we will be able to give constructive criticism instead of just bashing/negative feedback. AJ Fox |
| Vee | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 7:28 am Post subject: comic weeell Sped, despite what others say, i can't wait. love Dawn |
| Kjakings | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 6:01 am Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Graaaagh! It deleted my post! >< So, YOU are the all-powerful, magic demon eating, has-to-be-saved-from-himself, 'key' (never really understood this term, 90% of the time it's used as an excuse to give a character an even more special role) person? This has GOT to be one of the most clichéd storylines I've encountered in a long time, with one of the most mary-sueish characters. ALSO, [quote="Sped]till I get a few pages out I'll be uploading as soon as they are done. I've already started on the next page and it is half way done, but I'm working on 3 or 4 different things at once...[/quote] didn't I tell you he'd be thinking up excuses, week after week, to not draw the comic and just continue it in text issues? |
| Dark_Einstein | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 3:16 am Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Best. Comic. Ever. |
| sped | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 12:54 am Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Yes AJ, you are completely right. But I had no choice in the matter because this is somewhat like a dream or something. It starts of dark and it get's lighter as he wakes up, and since Sped's primarily color is blue I had to go with that too, but this page is...One of a kind and I don't see this happening again at least for a very, very long time. Thanks for pointing that out. ~Sped |
| aj - comic guru | Posted: 24 Mar 2009 12:27 am Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 (double post) Despite the fact that grammar Nazi's would have a field day tearing your writing apart, and that blue and gray really aren't a good combination for the eyes, it's not that bad. AJ Fox |
| aj - comic guru | Posted: 23 Mar 2009 11:28 pm Post subject: Re: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 ...he knows... UNFORTUNATELY we may be waiting until Zach gets here to see this mess. ...fuckin' newb. AJ Fox |
| Handle | Posted: 23 Mar 2009 11:25 pm Post subject: bug you posted 2 time s and this is only the title please fix it |
| sped | Posted: 23 Mar 2009 11:17 pm Post subject: Sped ZS Chronicles Issue 2 :: Dark Times part 1 pg 1 Hey it's me Sped again, and here is the first page to SZSC and is the only all text page, so don't worry the next page is going to be normal. And this page will be explained later on if you don't know what's going on. I was going to wait till Friday and upload every Friday but in till I get a few pages out I'll be uploading as soon as they are done. I've already started on the next page and it is half way done, but I'm working on 3 or 4 different things at once...Any way I will get it done as soon as possible and it will be worth the wait. ( Don't worry Zach, it won't take long) But for the next day or so I'll be to busy to draw though, but just for a day or so. Also the first SZSC Prelog should be up some time next week on SA and it should provide the much needed background to the characters, the war, the story, and more. So if you would like to know more on SZSC then you may want to check it out when it's done :P . But in till then please at least wait for the first "real" page, it will explain this page. keep it clean... ~Sped |


























